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:iconeddyplz: Eddy Chapter

As always, I write IN FAVOR of the Character whose chapter it is. Chapter 1 was Double D perspective. Now we're getting Eddy's view of stuff.

So we actually see Eddy test in a chamber. The reason this testing takes so long is because well, I wanted to focus a lot on HIS thought process.

So Eddy doesn't seem to be very fond of this place. He wants to go home and do what he loves to do: Scam.
I also revealed them to be 14 years old here. It's the summer before High School. But I kinda set them back to the show characteristics. The idea was that after the Movie Eddy eventually couldn't hep himself and reverted back to his old character. Then everything kinda went back to how it once was.

I brought about a lot of Portal 1 references when it was just Eddy n' GLaDOS. Once the other boys were back it was just classic interaction.
Oh yeah, I wrote this in 11th grade awhile back so... my vocabulary on Double D is a little awkward unlike today. I'm a lot better at writing him.

Though at the end of this chapter, you can see Eddy is okay. It's simple as this: They finish testing, they go home. (Though some of you who play Portal know what really happens at the end of testing...)

ATTENTION: If you are unable to read this version, try this link: [link]
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Prologue: [link] :iconportalgladosplz:
Chapter 1: [link] :icondoubledplz:
Chapter 2: You are here :iconeddyplz:
Chapter 3: To be uploaded :iconed-plz:
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Mood: Love !MeniMasel Mar 24, 2013  New member
Awwwwwwww.....
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Mood: Love ~DoubleDD977 Feb 24, 2013
Nice :) I like this !
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~FiverAspie Feb 23, 2013
I do not mean to be rude or press you, but when will the next chapter be uploaded? I'm loving this so far - I'd say this is the same level of genius as "Blue Sky" by *wafflestories on fanfiction.net!
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~BirchyEd Feb 27, 2013  Student General Artist
I really should get to chapter 3 soon. I've hardly payed attention to this account as of late. I really need to learn to give time to all of them.
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~ShnarfBird Jan 1, 2013
Very good!
I noticed a few flaws, and I can tell you how to fix at least one.
When there are thoughts involved, try using italics instead of regular text and a period.
So instead of
Man, this place is a mechanical freak show.
Use
Man, this place is a mechanical freak show
For example.
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~BirchyEd Jan 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Actually I did use italics. I think it switched when I downloaded it this way somehow.
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~ShnarfBird Jan 1, 2013
You did?
Oh.
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~felinemon Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! Great job! <^^> You really got their unique voices down. <^^>
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~BirchyEd Dec 30, 2012  Student General Artist
owo~ oooh thank you!
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~felinemon Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! <^^>
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