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PortalEd Chapter 2 - Written Version by BirchyEd PortalEd Chapter 2 - Written Version by BirchyEd
:iconeddyplz: Eddy Chapter

As always, I write IN FAVOR of the Character whose chapter it is. Chapter 1 was Double D perspective. Now we're getting Eddy's view of stuff.

So we actually see Eddy test in a chamber. The reason this testing takes so long is because well, I wanted to focus a lot on HIS thought process.

So Eddy doesn't seem to be very fond of this place. He wants to go home and do what he loves to do: Scam.
I also revealed them to be 14 years old here. It's the summer before High School. But I kinda set them back to the show characteristics. The idea was that after the Movie Eddy eventually couldn't hep himself and reverted back to his old character. Then everything kinda went back to how it once was.

I brought about a lot of Portal 1 references when it was just Eddy n' GLaDOS. Once the other boys were back it was just classic interaction.
Oh yeah, I wrote this in 11th grade awhile back so... my vocabulary on Double D is a little awkward unlike today. I'm a lot better at writing him.

Though at the end of this chapter, you can see Eddy is okay. It's simple as this: They finish testing, they go home. (Though some of you who play Portal know what really happens at the end of testing...)

ATTENTION: If you are unable to read this version, try this link: [link]
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Prologue: [link] :iconportalgladosplz:
Chapter 1: [link] :icondoubledplz:
Chapter 2: You are here :iconeddyplz:
Chapter 3: To be uploaded :iconed-plz:
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E1craZ4life Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
What'd you do with the prologue and first chapter?
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BirchyEd Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Student General Artist
Whoops did I forget to delete this?
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E1craZ4life Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:facepalm:
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BirchyEd Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Student General Artist
Well I don't like how they're written as much. They could use some sprucing up... So yeah. This was meant to be deleted as well
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E1craZ4life Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Are you rewriting them, or are they gone for good?
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BirchyEd Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014  Student General Artist
It's hard to say. PortalEd isn't my original project. It's my one fan-fiction cross over. As a result, it does not take priority over my original works, which, thanks to college are even hard to find time for. I often have random gaps of time where I do and don't work on PortalEd
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MeniMasel Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
Awwwwwwww.....
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DoubleDD977 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Nice :) I like this !
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FiverAspie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student General Artist
I do not mean to be rude or press you, but when will the next chapter be uploaded? I'm loving this so far - I'd say this is the same level of genius as "Blue Sky" by *wafflestories on fanfiction.net!
:D
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BirchyEd Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student General Artist
I really should get to chapter 3 soon. I've hardly payed attention to this account as of late. I really need to learn to give time to all of them.
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FiverAspie Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Student General Artist
(7-8 months passing by)

... Again, I do not mean to be rude but your story is quite exquisite. I'd love to read more, but if you have meant to drop it (I do apologise in advance if you have announced it already and I have missed it,) would you please confirm it?
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BirchyEd Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Well that's the thing about PortalEd. I don't wanna confirm or deny it.
Honestly college is my biggest priority. And I have other priorities on my ask account and working on my original works. But I'm not one to shut down a project. As I tend to pick them up after a long time.
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FiverAspie Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Very well - thank you for replying : )
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BirchyEd Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Heh... no problem.
Sorry again that it takes so long! Crazy life. *sigh*
Wish I had more time for all these great ideas...
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FiverAspie Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Student General Artist
As do all artists, unfortunately ^^'
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ShnarfBird Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
Very good!
I noticed a few flaws, and I can tell you how to fix at least one.
When there are thoughts involved, try using italics instead of regular text and a period.
So instead of
Man, this place is a mechanical freak show.
Use
Man, this place is a mechanical freak show
For example.
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BirchyEd Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Actually I did use italics. I think it switched when I downloaded it this way somehow.
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ShnarfBird Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
You did?
Oh.
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felinemon Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! Great job! <^^> You really got their unique voices down. <^^>
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BirchyEd Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student General Artist
owo~ oooh thank you!
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felinemon Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! <^^>
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kirbynat Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awww, Ed's so sweet he can even get GLaDOS to talk! :la: I love how well written this is. It has the same spirit and character of the Eds, with all the crazy awesomeness of Portal. :D
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BirchyEd Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student General Artist
XDDDD
Actually This is how Ed thinks he got GLaDOS to talk. Personally I believe she found him SO annoying she eventually was desperate to make him shut up. But you never know.

>w< Thank you!!!! I'm glad I matched both Portal and EEnE pretty well.
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